I showed my most recent shoot of the Bloody Mary that I did where I experimented with the different angles but the consensus was hard to understand the images without everything there. Be more messy with the image and making the cocktail would be more interesting. It is also too clean cut and perfect, which makes it not seem as real so the story isn’t as believable. Think about what exactly the bar is like create the bar atmosphere. Maybe even have a party yourself so the mess is a genuine mess.